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Poem Number 14933

from my attic window
Commentary:
stifling solitude
blurred edges of desire
rising without delight
fading in your absence
once familar voices
distant in memory
city streets
drenched grey by rain
thundering words echo
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smh
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a moment in time well captured smh. i can feel the mood you've created, it comes through loud and clear...ms
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Yeah, I agree. Paints a strong, well defined picture and feeling. good job.
rage
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Nice smh. cem
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thanks smh
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beautiful smh. ~ audee
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beautiful smh

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nice image with few words, good work --fintan
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