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Poem Number 13155

Pale Moon
My name since I can remember
cropped off by foster parents, didn't fit.
Dreaming sun sets in the west
Commentary:
I have the rest of it if anyone wants to see it just write chinwe@gurlmail.com. Thank you.
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Why don't u just post the rest of it here??
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how sketchy is that?
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huh? dt
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