Poem Number 13082

The stonejacket prefere
not beside such a hacker
grey eyes
no new hairstyles
embarising red
i got juxtapose
in my trouser
the truth of dust
so far away
the sail is blown
the flag is black
halfeyed
like a junkie I bear
the sweetness of home
my teddybear
two claps ahead
the drowned boat of comfort
bubbling in a sea of soap and lust
failed
the game of knowing and pretend
another view, another light
so deep
the tower has been built
once again by falconheads
and rumours in itself
don't take a lifted finger
on anemones that burn
from same flowering well
we come on spring
rocks; heavy thunder
flickerin reassons
The stonejacket prefere
not beside such a hacker
grey eyes
no new hairstyles
embarrassing red.

Falcon ~ Admit it; you are really Fallon! ~ Mervyn
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Mervyn, is this Fallon? Far be it for me to say but this poem does not move me like most of Fallon's poem do. Does anybody know why Fallon chose to be a mystery? Was it all the fighting and evil words about him? Darn people who aren't sensitive don't really how truly sensitive a poet is and though Fallon came across tough, I doubt he appreciated all the fighting. I don't know who agrees or disagrees with me but I think we really lay our souls out here when we share out poems.
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Fallon, besides being a good poet, is also a decent person, who stayed out of silly controversy, at the expense of not putting up a defense against trivial claims. I'm sure he'll be back, when the paranoid culprits have opted for sanity, or flown into the sun, like Icarus. ~ Mervyn
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stupid obsession
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LC (last commenter) -_ I agree with you; you have a stupid obsession against Fallon. -_ Dennis
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i havent paid any attention to this whole fallon thing going on here, is it that a bunch of girls are swooningly obsessed with him. cause boys dont get this obsessed over other boys do they, i mean unless there gay. is that what it is? some boy has a crush on fallon. cause im pretty sure hes a hetero male wih a wife and children. dt
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dt -_ If you think demanding fair play for a wronged person, is having a gay crush on an invisible cyber being, then you are even dumber than the spiteful, inferior so-called poets, who chased him away. -_ Dennis
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please step away from this comment-room. This above comments have nothing to do here. ~ falcon