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Poem Number 23326

your muse
calling us back
one by one to return
sojouners sharing some respite
and love
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hearing
not listening
listening and not obeying
creation calling me
again
wishing
for stars to fall
into the silent void
where voices enlighten the darkness
joyfully
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nothing now but a tiny spark
and us huddled 'round
waiting

Commentary:
Ah, yes, the muse is quite an irresistable beauty :)
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hearing
not listening
listening and not obeying
creation calling me
again
was suppose read
hearing
not listening
creation calling me
listening and not obeying
again

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Let me try that again. I have to get use to this interface again:
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hearing
not listening
listening and not obeying
creation calling me
again
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was suppose to have read:
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hearing
not listening
creation calling me
listening and not obeying
again
-
Daniel

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oops....forgot the space between....coffee or tea Daniel (__)D :)
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So very lovely!
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Never seen a betetr post! ICOCBW
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