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Poem Number 10745

love is rollercoaster
but i can't find a ticket booth
i'm ready for the ride
creative writing class
i don't wanna be here
i'd rather be in hell
but i think i'm already there
DEEFSDFS
Commentary:
grawlz is a pimp
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rest of poem doesn't fit with first 3 lines--i like the first 3 lines--says a lot in few lines--window watcher
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You have my sympathy.Webwolf
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