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Poem Number 2785

All the trees in Birnam
Like cybernetic ships
move on their way to Dunsinane
like poems on puter chips
when in a hundred years or so
when love is common place
I like to join you for a drink
assuming humanoids embrace
a toast to us all..poetic love

Commentary:
For my buddy Allan...scotch and soda..jigger of gin..oh my do I feel hi.......jake
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ha, ha haaaa ol Jake boy, look for me....behind a tree...-- love it :)))) - allan
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I now comment this work to the back pages..the wager is in tact imbeded forever in a chip..computer archivest..hello this is the year of our Lord 1997 do your computers love? can you?........Jake
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may humanoids ALWAYS embrace..pen
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Indeed they do Penny..Indeed they do..thus distinguishing ourself from robotics..that maybe be programed to..........jake
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yes Jake I for one can, - and what am i beyond an incredibly complex biological existence, genetic cybernetic "robotic" call'd human -- ever read Phil K Dick - "do androids dream of electric sheep..." - well just another spark jumping -- allan (one boottle by now)
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Science!true daughter of Old Timethou art!
Who alterest all things with thy peering eyes.
Why preyest thou thus upon the poet's heart,
vulture,whose wings are dull realities?
How should we love thee?or deem thee wise,
Who wouldst not leave him in the wandering
to seek for treasure in the jewelled skies,
albeit he soaredwith undauted wing?
Hast thou not dragged Diana from her car?
and driventhe hamadryad from the wood
to seek a shelter in some happier star?
Hast thou not tornthe Naiad from her flood,
the Elfin from the green grass,and from me
the summer dream beneath the tamarind tree?
E A POE
what ever you are,however you are made ..the result is a joy to know! )jake
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cling onto this straw a little Jake -- science/poetry -- think poe is wrong here "dragging diana from the car" ... to put i politely : hmmmmm! -- ever seen pictures from Hubble space telescope ?, culums of creation in the eagle nebula..pure poetry if ever i saw such thing -- no easy answers here -- allan
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no indeedy::)
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yep all said and done in the middle somewhere we meet...)))jake Agree Poe a bit radical ..man like his morphine..shouldn't bite the hand that feeds ya so to speak...Jake
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