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Poem Number 23343
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the secrets of my mind r not hard 2 find,unless u choose 2 do not c.
r u stimulated by the mystery?
could it possibly a simple lack of interest?
i admit,i am not the best.
however,unlike most,i can boast that i am indeed damn close.
i come 2 thee,asking r u willing 2 do what u need 2 inorder that the situation b rectified?
it can't b denied.
the strings.
the baggage u haul.
i accept it all.
y?
i call thee "friend".
a name exalted.
chosen 4 only...the elite.
4 u,there is always a seat @ my table.
i am able 2 hear and accept the word "no".
i go 4 nothing more than complete honesty.
it's just me being who i am.
i'll b damned if i ever change.
if i did,would u even want me 2?
it's me and u.
warriors.
fighting.
dodging the barrage of dagger like issues that have been hurled @ us by the b.s's of the world.
united we stand.
divided,we fall.
we conquer those in distance of the sound of our call 2 arms.
we bask in the glorious light of the charms that HE bestows.
we r resillent.
it's all we know.
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"it's all we know" - the ignorance of knowledge, both strength and an unimaginable weakness, which matters not.
Nicely written.
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