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Poem Number 19708

Rumors of Heaven
Commentary:
Did we laugh as much
as my heart remembers,
and slay the night's dragons
holding tomorrow in our arms?
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A love warm enough
to shame the sun
as it bound us soul to soul,
with rumors of Heaven.
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Anon.
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Vivid, yet short and sweet.. Very good. K-1
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It's beautiful. ms
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You say so much in two short verses...and so well! I enjoyed reading this very much. JFC
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Thanks K-1, ms, and JFC for your kind words. Glad you liked the poem.Anon.
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a beautiful love letter to your love. Beautiful! Rae
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Priceless memories. Very well done
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Thank you all for the kind words.Anon.
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Beautiful, poignant, strong poem. This is one for the "keeper file". I'll enjoy it for many years. Thank you. R.J.G.

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breath takingly beautiful, a painted picture to remember,
lovely. Kristine
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