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Poem Number 16620

Raindrop on her face
mixes with widow's teardrop
Can't tell which is which



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COULD IT BE THE TEARS OF PAIN OR COULD IT BE THE TEARS OF JOY,YES ARE MINDS ARE WONDERING
Commentary:
Feel free to think out loud on this HAIKU. -- Tom
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She has a haiku.
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Comment 2 reminds me of Candid Camera, where Program guy asks passerbys in the street:"Do you have scruples?". Not sure of its meaning, one guy replied: "Yes; I keep a few at home." ~~ Merkel
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widow's face
through the pain teardrops
and rain fall....alice

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Merkel/anon, amusing comments. Alice, thanks for your version. -- Tom
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A.C.(Cleveland) -- Haiku is 3-lines; but your verse adds a poignant thought. Good of you join in. -- Tom
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