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Poem Number 18658

temperature aperture science portal stickman
Commentary:
don't be such a dick, man
dispense with the shitman
conscience and quagmires
afterlife of a live wire.

wanting to be stated
instead of mating
concepts --

-- ting spacecraft mission drink.
dang powder.
sweet on
skin.

nam ,kcid a hcus eb t'nod
namtihs eht htiw esnepsid
serimguaq dan ecneicsnoc
eriw evil a fo efilretfa

/wc
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