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Poem Number 19482

Oh, Really?
Commentary:
You never call me.
Even your reappearance, as graceful as it was
was just a step.

I'm sensitive, I never told you.
Drop of wind cracks my ears.
I'm glad you're happy, at least, there is that.
No, really. I am glad. It is a good thing. That you are happy,
it is good, I am glad, that you are good thing.

What do they want me to say? Should I respond in cheer?
Must I augment the structure of their deignings?
Is that what being close is about?

Fanciful and flippant adherer. Shrug, shrug, stickers stuck.
Playing with words, is my caveat. Nip and tuck. :D

Self confidence the downfall due to asses.

-fr0
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