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Poem Number 19469

You people are not describing enough
Commentary:
It is important to dissect further.


Believe me, I am as disgusted as I may be,
but I have lived so many other lives that
common dissection, the venture into the cavity
of a dead person, is no longer a block.

Some kind of being is blocking me.
Where is the multipass???
Why am I being blocked by a lesser
thing?

He said that I think I am more intelligent
than him.
He used this as a kind of guilt upon me.
I need more guilt.

It is important to dissect further.

I, such a willing subject.

-fr0
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