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Poem Number 19189
if yoo can't handle the heat, get out of the kitchen
Commentary:
you laid a trap
for me
that you fell into.
and you looked a bit
stupid.
with your crazy eyes
stalking me
all the time.
i saw how you played
i've memorized all your tricks
no words were spoken
thru my silence
til,
i fell
in love
with the game.
i discovered how you loved
I played on your desperation.
I memorized all your kindness
and drowned in your
Affection.
i'm addicted now
to all the little things you do,
i know all your moves
i breathe them all in
so i could feel you
when you're not around.
and it hurts
and it feels so good
and it's all wrong
but i can't stop
now.
I have laid a trap
for you
that i fell for
because i can't resist being the one you want…
-turps
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why is irfan baig waisting eveyone's time?
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maybe he ended up playing eternal darkness, but ended up just being pious.
mwahahaah.
really? is this how they defone their 'complexities'?
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defone = define.
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you must understand that doserloadedwerds.
ending up just being pious.
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(baig)
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