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Poem Number 19155

sada is always kissing you

Commentary:
here's a stop sign instead of feeling bad.

monster from the well will taste your tounge.
intentionally mispelled internationally, intentionally.

why does your makeup suck so much? :(
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Mr. Irfan Baig has actually gone wrestling Bears.

To disprove that idiot and its girfriend's theory about being eaten.

Come back when you have real tears!
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also: www.youtube.com/watch?v=kb6ErLPt4t8
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i can't make heads or tails of any of this. but it looks like you have started lugubriating early this weekend. premature lugubriation! hahaha - NANGALEEMA
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irfan + inebriation = lugubriation. i had to coin a new word just for you. get a grip on yourself, man. (i am slapping you in the face and shaking you firmly by the shoulders.) now let's have less lugubriation and more lucubration. - N
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no insults here - just trying to cause you to snap out of this funk. - N
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(there's a tear in your beer... - N)
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N.

mustav drank it, what ho? wat ho?

how come you are not siding with me?
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nonsense i Am on your side. i'm trying to prop you up, so you don't spill your tody. - N
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nonsense i Am on your side. i'm trying to prop you up, so you don't spill your tody. - N
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(hmm apparently i'm a little tipsy myself - N)
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well gotta go. don't spend your day spewing fuck yous. everything is going to be fine. - N
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thanks nancy pelosi.
digg.com/dialogg/Nancy_Pelosi_1
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riverfr0zen
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f u - N
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heheh that's funny. eff you - "f. u. - N" - f.u.n.!
www.youtube.com/watch?v=4TOKbhfYCVQ - N
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