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Salon of Solo Poetry for Critique - One

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Poem Number 19132

storm and steel eye
Commentary:
the gnarling wind
mustering descending
storm and steel eye
glancing
down and under that normal up is
all thick with fog and thunder

sinister stir
ominous and dancing
the depth of the storm weapon cutting
dark and dreading
breaking embedding
opening the open ground under

NANGALEEMA (to be continued)

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