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Poem Number 19057

and anudder one bites the dust..

Commentary:
two articles down, one more to go..

we're having one of those days i haven't seen in a long time, perhaps even a decade. the bright hot dryness reminds me of being a child. the blue sky stretched drum-tight over the earth, the entire world buzzing with UV radiation. it makes me feel energized; something like an echo reflects off the skin of that sky, bouncing back into me, through me. i am compelled to move, stirred by the heat and light.

i feel i am on the verge of something. this kind of day makes me feel like i am standing on the edge of an unseen precipice, ready to free-fall.

amber
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good on ya :) ya, i'm shedding old skins. slinking forward renewed. hadn't considered it related to the weather but maybe ... this is the time of year, if i still lived in the country there'd be the sound of crickets day and night. totally tribal, mesmerizing, spiritual.

nice writing amber. spot on old girl! spot on.

janet
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amber, there is so much that i love about what you said here and the way you said it. invigorating writing. like a poetic shot of vitamin D! - N
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;) amber

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Indeed, "a poetic shot of vitamin D!"
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