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Poem Number 389

i miss you: does that make me a fool?
Commentary:
only if you miss what doesn't exist
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well then :) perspective
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so, to clarify, you are channeling in from another dimension?
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who is you, and what am i? :b
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it's so cool you don't exist and perhaps i don't either. material ism is such a pain. wheeeeeeeee !!!!
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