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Poem Number 363

Human Flaws
Commentary:
Human flaws
In her closed mind lurk
As many plans for the day are made.

She nags,
He dresses, plans his work
And plants a kiss on her open mouth.




~Laura Morry Williams, "My Many Moons"
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