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Salon of Poetry for Critique - Four
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Poem Number 320
MOON-LIGHT
Commentary:
As the moon-light play through the window,
It's soft light illuminates you loving face.
with lines of worry of things that only you know.
What have I done right in this world to deserve you?
I watch you sleep in a soft restless peace.
I million times I have held you loving hand,
And a million time I have held you in my arms.
I tell you that I love you, but do you really understand?
As I go through my busy day my thoughts return to you
I sit and smile, as I think of the years long passed.
I would sit and worry if your love was really true.
When I asked you to marry me, and you were mine at last.
I wonder when I tell you I love and need you, do you understand?
Thank you me dear, my darling for being my loving wife
This world could not be the same if you were not mine.
You're not just the woman that I married, you're my love, my life.
---RJ
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That was a very nice poem. But I can't find any meaning for it.
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RJ's love needs no meaning,at least to us
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Right on. Love is love and love is good. *st*
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