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Poem Number 23183
you were(right here)i am
Commentary:
i pretend like i do.
like i have pianos,
you.
i pretend to hold your hand.
i wake up
with the remote.
colored wires
making music
in far away boxes.
so i pretend like i do.
like i have pianos,
wires,
you.
06-09-08
-jerry