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Poem Number 23141

There was a liberal gal from Berkeley
She bared her chest literally
Anywhere she fancied
She fell in a pool real rancid
Fully covered, she was still smelly

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Commentary:
It's a limerick. Comments welcome - Tom
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tom. iknow you are trying hard, but you really don't have any idea of what your are doing. Still, i wouldn't spoil your fun, or our's. "Keep on keepin' on". Give us some more.//love, Lily
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Lily, your comment tells me someone is reading this poem, breaking the deafening silence. It reminds me of the saying:"if a tree fell in the forest and no one was there to hear it, did the tree really fall?" Limericks are usually risque. I don't know if this one is risque enough. Thank you for taking time off from attending opera, or walking dogs, to read and comment on this limeric. Tom
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