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Poem Number 23132

fuckin' shit yo
Commentary:
Life is ritual,
the delicate balance of perversion, art and naivete
All that is left of the ritual are the ruins
like a mayan temple.

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I try to say hello, but I've lost the grace
to wish a merry holiday.
to G,
to ash,
to nai
I love ya, and wish the best,
but with condition
because that's my situation
shit.

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