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Poem Number 23094

Games

He was a sucker for soccer
Watched with much munchies
and oddball audible edibles
He'd grown to groan near grown-ups
Thinks creek crack is a lot of crock
His gal galls him as she goads
"Oh, Ryan, let's go watch Orion!"
barely would berate his beret
Offered him icee, just said:"I see"

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Commentary:
Feel free to add or comment. tp

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Not much to be said, except it seems you had fun writing this, delighting on your play on words. Your title befits this game-play of words.
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Thank you for the feed back.tp
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One more thing anon, although I enjoyed writing it, I posted it so readers could share the enjoyment. I hope it did the job. tp
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done 11/30
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