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Poem Number 23061

Funerals

I hate to death
going to funerals
The dead don't know
you are there
The living want to know
in your are there
Hateful relatives
face you again
You wat to jump into
the hole ahead of the coffin
to escape the horrid ones
but protoco stops you
So you die inside
till burial is done

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Commentary:
line 6 from top should read: IF you are there
line3 from bottom should read: but PROTOCOL stops you - Merkel
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