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Teen Salon - Three

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Poem Number 335

Don't you believe me?
I am telling the truth
What? You want proof?
don't you love me ??
This rose shows my love for you; it is also withered
With the times you have beaten it away casting it
to the depths of despair showing it
with no care making it
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