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Poem Number 403

Things are looking up
For you perhaps... but not for me
Depends on how you look at the cup
is it half full or half empty?
Well i drank that glass so now I hiccup
empty and waiting to be refilled up
with more and more whiskey.
and all for me me me!!!!
as it should be, be, no share-y
I'm a boozer
And a loser
But I'm glad I'm not you, sir!
so i swallow another sip and yell GIR
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