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Poem Number 1032

broken records

Commentary:
frozen hearts and inflated pride
protecting a vast emptiness inside
there is no safe place to hide
a matter of ancient history
the time is so illusory
with a new day comes a new story
yet the same old players strut abou
tthere is no game, it's been worn out
humbled heart and broken pride shout
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