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Poem Number 1031

did i give to little?
or did i give to much?
was it something i did or something i forgot to say?
the only thing i took from you
was a little of your time
and inreturn i only got in your way
llee
if am 'too' give anything, it's a dime
and if i dont give you anything your not worth my time
Commentary:
I was like that where people wonder did I give to liitle or to much
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