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Poem Number 3420

Never have I seen
A maid so winsome and sweet
Grist for the heart's mill
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In her garen
She blossoms
Attracting butterflies
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dangle the carrot
let her be lead astray
to the bedchamber
Commentary:
Ack!...Your foul *erases you with a Giant wad of T.P. Glad to have never of met you! Sheesh ..
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ooooookay, i don't see what merited that comment. i've seen way worse on this site.
---not the author
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