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Haiku - Four

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Poem Number 1910

summer sweet nectar
upon his lips wet kisses
sticky indulgence

Commentary:
erotic :)
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Delicious!
Always wonderful to hear from RubyRed Lady
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summer is sweetness
let's feed bread to the gulls
birds replace my love
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GrandmaBea, May you know love!

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