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Haiku - Four

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Poem Number 1907

breath cloud drifts away
ice diamonds on every tree
Winter majesty
on this ice scorched day.
Commentary:
ice scorched day
an enviable phrase - one of those "I wish I had written that" phrases.
Lida Jo from Idaho 2/12/08
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