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Haiku - Three

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Poem Number 1927

Winter brings sweet rest
Beneath it's snowy mantel
The Earth dreams of spring
But Summer thoughts are all a glow
The sun is swollowed by the chill in the air
Commentary:
Winter reigns
beneath it's mantel
new life stirs
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BR, your three lines of Haiku are well done and present a cohesive picture that an artist could illustrate. Wish I had the painting and the poem superimposed.
Lida Jo from ID
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