The Interactive Poetry Pages

Gothic/Surreal - Two

You are invited to add your own commentary for this poem.

Poem Number 1071

you again
me but not me
a river washes away
what time can't
and fear won't

Commentary:
to find freedom in each death
a hope for relief for all
that suffer the same fate
letting the grip release the only anchor
to any real or imagined landscape
--
an illusion and discomfort
the unrequited and unresolved
sense that there was a piece
that fit where the emptiness
breathes
--
to protect us from the sensation
that if any moment we relax our vigilance
we will be swallowed in blackness
that follows the unsuspecting
yet never seems to worry them
-------
great read. i like this. - N
Your comments. Remember to mention the line number if it applies.
Sign your name if you want to:



Central Viewing Page.
Top Welcome Page.