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Salon of Solo Poetry for Critique - Four

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Poem Number 900

anti-gravity

Commentary:
there again is the memory of things that could have been
or not meant to be
why then if in all these moments the souvenir of places
i have not been
keeps falling off the shelf, where it was savely stored,
refusing to be broken
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