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Salon of Poetry for Critique - Two

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Poem Number 475

ain't no poems here
wonder what happened?
someone got busy
on their keyboard azappin'
cancelling poems
(gotta make this rhyme)
hope they had them a deleteful time
and then her face changed, a subtle shift
pLEASE CLOSE OUT THIS SITE FOREVER and STOP /wc from abusing innocent poets.
Please close that store of thrift
and throw those cheap'uns a dime
or if you see em hitching, give em a lift

Commentary:
good conclusion :)
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You are back then, to share writing?
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When the spirit moves.
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In that case, I recommend U Haul!! Cheap and convenient spirit relocation :)
ywia
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haven't you guys ever heard of exquisite corpse. How about Andre Breton. Or Rimbaud. It really is
something. give a man technology and he'll blow up anything he could get hold of. poetry is not
a word game. what saddens me is the utter disregard of the history of poetry. and the complescent smile like a screen saver, whispering, "but it's mine," "me to share" Please get back to reading
something more than your name. a bit harsh but come on! -redpond
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of course you are not serious? "poetry is not a word game." the Surrealist had games they played with words. I have a copy of their book. Read up a bit yourself.
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Here you go: A Book Of Surrealist Games
Compiled by Alastair Brotchie, Edited by Mel Gooding
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This is a modern day compilation - as you can imagine, copies of the original text are rare :)
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Hey poet people lighten up. Poetry is where YOU find it. Find it in you own way and allow others the same courtesy.
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