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Poem Number 23198

ub40 and virginity

Commentary:
at that time,
i failed to see the quirk,
or maybe the
pretty,
in the ub40
song that she summed our
love into.
 
it took a long time to
convince that
elvis did it first,
the song.
 
it took much less
time to convince
her that she
took my
virginity.
-jerry
07-02-08

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