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Poem Number 23186

possibility
Commentary:
it was only a moment and i was unaware
but i carried you close to my heart
when i didn't even know you lived
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because i never had the chance
to begin to imagine your name, your smile
i don't know how to grieve your loss
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but i do grieve
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*grace

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This is a tender, beautiful poem
that cannot help but draw the reader into your sorrow
thanks
Jake

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