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Poem Number 23156

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morning drive portrait~
Commentary:
a square field of february mud,
cultivated by carelessness,
below the sky
above the ground,
two horses kissed. oddly,
one brown
one white

good morning winter.

)Kaleb
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"Cultivate by carelessness" (-----great line
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