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Poem Number 23104

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i say what i need to with my lips
she kisses with her eyes open. i'm
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bare in these rooms we find
and keep finding.
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to watch the sun move across the walls
is to acknowledge darkness;
we meet at night.
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there is a secret in your eyes i wish not to speak of.
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raul
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