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Poem Number 23057

Hope
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Hope
Trash littered doorways
tenements loom
where a dandelion blooms.
Trashed and broken lives
predicate doom
where a dandelion blooms.
Sunlight scatters shadows
filters down
where tenements loom.
Hope is born though
trash litters doorways
and tenements loom
where a dandelion blooms.
JFC©



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good repetition. thanks for posting. makes me think...
)Kaleb
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Good depiction of gloom and hope, side by side - Tom
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