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Poem Number 22331

I Saw Sawdust in Soda

and Full Lips Smakin'
Soda Man utensils- hide the fact!
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How long, How long
Till she pulls them back!
Soda Man
Big white milkshaes and little snacks!
Commentary:
I hope I'm not messing with something precious here.
~Cooker
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No, you're cookin'.
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