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Poem Number 23190

Cool cascades of time
Have we fallen in line
To forget what it's like to be young
I have soldiered the fall
Memory wasted it all
To much work, far less pleasure, no fun
So I envisioned a night
Backdrop the Las Vegas lights
My bank roll as tight as a drum
The cooler was there
Once againg with that cold black stare
But I walked away with millions
The odds were five hundred to one
Commentary:
you got your money and your life twice. good for you! nice story...f
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