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Poem Number 23169
This sudden mess
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This sudden mess
The exchange of words
My heart broke at that moment
Loss of innocence loss of trust
Are there any good humans left?
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This sudden mess
I am so enraged
My belief system implodes
My body can't filter all this stress
This threw me from the path I was walking
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This sudden mess
I told them never to leave them alone with you
This sudden mess
You did exactly what I thought you would do
This sudden mess
You are worse than a killer Your a molester
If I ever see your face again I will kill you myself !
The last line floors me. -Jesse
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