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Teen Salon - Three
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Poem Number 336
Daddy, can't you see me?
Can't you see that I am dying?
Cant you see that i need to be with you?
Can't you see that mummy's lying?
Can't you see she is killing us?
Daddy, can't you hear me?
Can't you see what she is hiding?
can't you see she doesn't care
Can't you see I'm left here crying?
Daddy where have you gone?
Why did you leave me?
Where did I go wrong?
How can I be happy without you by my side?
Please come back...
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