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Poem Number 716

Why does love hurt so much...
we are afraid to let it go
hugging what we love, til their head pops off
decapitated, we find our bodies weren't the ones who hated
ideas and heads break the heart strings desire
longing to have someone hold us
feeling desprate and alone
wanting that one person but they dont want you back
the desprate tears we cry
why does love have to hurt us so.....
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