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I'M HOME!! OH yea! I'M HOME! Poetry has always been good to be but lyrics have a beat. I know. I got beat up by one last week. jim me :-)* ( notice the beard? )
Anonymous, Lake Louise, Alberta, Canada; jim_mackey@pch.gc.ca

I love this page and the lyrics on it but I'm a musician really and I can see tunes for lots of these songs! Any ideas as to how I could write the tunes down as I don't have e-mail??
Spider, N.Yorks, UK;

Spider-I wish we had a midi interface or something! Not possible
in the near future, anyway. The do-re-me stuff seems kind of limited.
-Ann
Ann, ;

I had a tough time finding this page again
and I'M GLAD YOUR STILL HERE
PEACE AND LOVE
Anonymous, ;

I wish I could write songs, and perhaps someday I will, but not right now.
Nancy, ;

Cool!I love poetry and music - the two go hand in hand. It's cool that someone else realises the link. I think that I will be back here a lot!!!
George Fanthom (girlie!), Cardiff, Wales;

hey, i'm new to this forum...and think it's pretty cool...so, i'd like to submit an
entire song i wrote and let people hack it up...
or whatever...if that's feasible...whatever,
here goes...

(yet untitled)

v1:

night
& time stands still
removed of its armor
the winter wind
sends a chill
into the arms of the charmer

(chorus)

the fire in your eyes
a kiss
sublime
woman comes to me
releases my soul
sets me free

now i see you
see you everywhere
pushing clouds before the storm
(yeah) i see you
see you everywhere
pushing clouds before the storm

v2:

day
& dreams take wing
by the light of the risin' sun
the stars last night
told me i
was the lucky one

(repeat chorus)

(guitar solo)

v3:

night again
& i hear your voice
a gentle whisper in the risin' wind
must be my destiny
your in my arms again

the fire in your eyes
a kiss sublime
woman comes to me
releases my soul
sets me free

now i see you
see you everywhere
pushing clouds before the storm
(yeah) i see you
see you everywhere
pushing clouds before the storm

yes i see you
i really really see you
pushing clouds before the storm
(yeah) i see you
see your long blond hair
pushing clouds before the storm

(fade out repeating last lines)

texas vid, SoCal; jstepma1@san.rr.com

somebody check out the one i started called "weird" and add to it...hehehe if u know the next line...heres a hint..i didn't write the song
maria, ;

thanks a lot, I´ve been looking for this for a long time
Oliver, bochum, germany; oliver.hanstein@ruhr-uni-bochum.de

This is an excellent cite I love the idea behind it. People these days need an outlet for their anger as well as their happy thoughts. What a better way to introduce poetry into the lives of people in todays society.
Anonymous, Washington;

I don't think this is apprpriate because there are some young viewers who look at this and it talks about dick and etc.. I think it should be a more mature way of thinking because alot of people who wrote these bad lines are old enough to know better!
Lakia, Ohio; Parisparisn@cs.com

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