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I have visited your page many times and have found hours of enjoyment through those visits. Please accept my sincere gratitude for have this page available to all who truly enjoy the art of poetry.
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Stumpy
Anonymous, ;
this might be hard to do, but my suggestion would be that for the solo critique it is a little confusing a) that you can apparently add a line to solo poems. Also, if poems could be added (for solo salon) all at once instead of line-by-line, it would be nice.
junip, ;
Having just found this internet location- helped
by one from the writing group I've been with for
three years, and having written poems for a long number of years, how do I submit such? Thanks
Stephen Harris, Puyallup, Wash. 98371; toltt@e-mail.msn.com
Ann, again I would like to thank you.
You have given us a great opportunity to express
ourselves. A chance to interact with others and
hopefully improve any talent that we may have, with
the assistance and commments of the others.
Thanks again,and best wishes ---RJ
Anonymous, ; bjackson@montana.edu
Why do we find the compulsoin to die?
To know love
To know pain
It's all the same
But mind over matter baby
That's the way
You'll find balence
Gratifacation
Leaving behind Justifacation
Like an orange that bleed away the peel
Bare and sensitive to the world
Finding temperment of liquid steel
Pleasures of the flesh left behind.
Knowing the deadly meal
But still keeping kind.
Choosing to eat only lotus
And drinking only wine.
Human fralties stripted.
Spiritually equiped
Fighting a world of mechanical love.
Others self-distruct
Implode, from the weight of the world.
But into heaven your soul is hurled.
Saying good bye to the dark
Hello to love.
Which you wear snugly
Like a silken glove.
Dustin, Roscommon;
Being a German Poet who once in a while also feels like writing and reading English work, I enjoy this page very much and I am sure to spend many an hour here again and again...
Natalie Bosien (http://www.NatalieBosien.de), Koenigswinter, Germany; post@nataliebosien.de
How do you do? I just stumbled across this site, and I love the idea! Being a musician who loves improvisational interplay between musicians this obviously strikes a chord in me.Unless this gets to be too much work for you to keep running, please keep this going. If you ever decide to quit this could you (or anyone) please let me (and anyone else) know of any other site that will continue this wonderful creative exchange opportunity? Thanks again and feel free to Email me if you want.Take it easy everyone, and never forget to take the time to notice the beauty around you!
Myrat, A dark studio into which I vanish; Myratsareintune@aol.com
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